I'll be with you

in the darkest of time

i'll be by your side

in the light of the day

in the sky of night

in your heart

in your mind

in the wind on a weary day

till i see you again

i'll always be by your side

Reviews

[Southern Cross]

I liked this the best of all the ones you requested. Nice flow and choice of words..simple and direct in its content. Great job !

[Lindsay T]

Sweet and beautiful. I like it! :)

[Btwixer]

Short and wonderful, enjoyed

[afra]

dis poem is very sweet and deep ...keep writing

[C.]

short and cute c:

[kayla]

This is a cute poem(: I like it. Keep writing!

[Dayran]

Such things are possible and do occur in our lives. What we could do more of, is to create awareness of it.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Bold, stark and clever, well done, good read.

[myrto]

A nice, simple and romantic poem. A very nice use of repetition on the second and last line, I think it vitalizes the point of the poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the desire and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote