I'll be with you

I'll be with you

A Poem by Marissa

in the darkest of time

i'll be by your side

in the light of the day

in the sky of night

in your heart

in your mind

in the wind on a weary day

till i see you again

i'll always be by your side

© 2012 Marissa


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A lovely poem, a great job.


Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

thanks you! Glad you like it (:
Short and meaningful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

awesome...thanks!
One of your best, like the metaphorical elements that make it a bit richer in a literary sense, good form, good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

thank you
short but with meaning

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

thank you (:
lovely poem. I love this sort of thing that says it all in such short time

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

thank you glad you like it
Nice font;) very nice poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very sweet! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and sweet, very nice :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


very sweet

Posted 12 Years Ago


hey good job! very sweet, and i feel like this would make a good song....i dont know, whatever you decide to do with it.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Hi! Im Marissa I like writing poems and im not very good but it's how I get my feelings out. I'm a sophomore. Nothing better than friends and family. (but to me family isn't always blood) and well I l.. more..

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