My Prayer <3

My Prayer <3

A Poem by Marissa
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Lord, I praise you for blessing me with such amazing people in my life. <3

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God,
I pray to you
To keep her safe.
I pray you keep me strong,
through the good, the bad
The easy and the hard.
Lord,
You have all the power.
I believe you'll do what's best.
I pray that if you take her,
That you assure her...
That I love(d) her.
God,
I pray that if that was Good-Bye
She knows I cherished her.
God,
If you take her away...
Will you do me a favor?
Tell her she meant the world to me.
And that I'll be okay...
Even though it hurts
Because I know she's safe
In heaven with you.
-Amen
P.s. God, If you take her away 
please be with me through the pain...and carry me 
through it all.
-Marissa

© 2012 Marissa


Author's Note

Marissa
This poem is about my Great-Grandma she was going through surgery and was really sick...we weren't sure f she was going to make it so I wrote this poem....God left her here on earth with me for atleast a little bit longer...I thank him for it very much.

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Amazing poetry :) Brought tears to my eyes. I'm glad she's here with you. This is a really touching piece. Death is a hard time. And the days of waiting in a hospital is in a way much worse. You're frozen. You don't know what will come, but you have an idea of your 2 possibilities. And one of them is too hard for you to consider. The praying, the fear, the sleepless worrying...soon it's all just a bad memory...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marissa

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! You are exactly right. It seems like such a bad dream.
Blue Ivory

11 Years Ago

Well I'm glad you're past it now :)
Marissa

11 Years Ago

thank you!
Beautiful thoughts. I'm thankful for you that your grandma has been granted to you for more time. I'm sure that if she dies knowing these words you've written, she'll feel very loved.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

thank you! And I sure hope she knows how loved she is. (:
mmrom517

12 Years Ago

You couldn't have honored her more.
Marissa

12 Years Ago

thank you! For such encouraging words....I really do appreciate them. God Bless!
I love it! Wishing you both all the blessings your hearts can hold..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

Thank you! And you too!
Lovely heartfelt poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

thank you!
A beautiful prayer. I'm glad she is still with you. No-one is as special as a grandmother. Especially a Great-grandmother. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

Your welcome! And thank you for your awesome review. (:
Beautiful prayers.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

thank you
nice prayers, we need it specially when we feel weakness..thanks to god for saving her for you

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

Thank you! And Yes very much
An inspiring concern for your gran. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

Thanks! (:
A poem that impress with genuine concern for your Gran, fine work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

Thank-You!
You have strong faith. Loved your poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Marissa

12 Years Ago

I try! And Thank You!

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Hi! Im Marissa I like writing poems and im not very good but it's how I get my feelings out. I'm a sophomore. Nothing better than friends and family. (but to me family isn't always blood) and well I l.. more..

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