My promise to you!

For: Zachary (:

It may not be real,

But trust me I'll always act like it is.

I'll always be there for you,

Even during the times I'm not wanted.

You're very special to me,

And no matter what I got your back.

When I first met you-

You called me your girlfriend.

In just one years time,

I went from your girlfriend to your sissy.

Now, here's a secret bubby,

I wouldn't trade that for anything.

The way you look up at me and tell me you love me-

With those big brown eyes and big ole smile, just melts my heart away.

You can do anything you want-

And I'll stand by you through it all.

-You'll never know how much I love you, but don't ever second guess it... I Love You!

Author's Note

I know the form is sloppy, but try an pay more attention to the words... On that note to explain this is for a little boy who is very special to me and he is like my little brother he is 6.

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

I knew a little boy who would fit this poem for me exactly. Unfortunately, I don't get to see him or his sister anymore, but the promise still holds true for me, just as it does for you. This is a brilliant poem. Thank you.

[Marissa]

Your welcome! And this little boy and his little sister mean the world to me....and If I didn't get to see them anymore I'd probably end up being depressed to be honest....so hold in there.

[Lina Grey]

I'm trying my best :P kinda failing, because this happens to be the worst thing that's happened in either of their short lives, and I can't do anything for them! I really hope you never lose contact with yours, their worth the world.

[Marissa]

Thank you! I know it's hard these two weeks I won't be able to see them cuz I'm in the middle of drivers ed and so I know it's difficult being away from them for this long I couldn't imagine losing them forever...but always know I'm here if you need to talk and Your gonna make it through alright even though it doesn't seem that way...Mine are 6 and 2 the little boy is 6 and the little girl is 2 they are my world just like they are my real siblings and there's not a thing in the world I wouldn't do for either one of them.

[Lina Grey]

Mine are a bit older, the girl is 10 and the boy is 8, i think, but I still think of them as being 8 and 6 respectfully, since I only really saw them during the summer and once a month :P Thank you for your sentiment though. I might have to take you up on that offer :)

[Marissa]

I'd be more than happy to talk to you. (:

[Lina Grey]

thank you :)

[Marissa]

your welcome.

[Mark]

I got kinda choked up reading this. It's very special and the form is just fine (though I'm no professor so what do I know?) Good work

[Marissa]

Thank you! He is one very special little boy...and I'm sure you know more what your talkin bout then I do....thank you! _would love to hear more reviews on my other work (:

[C.]

This was really good (: I liked it

[Marissa]

thank you! I'm really happy you liked it (:

[Laura Maidah]

Do people mean it when they say this? Always wondered and hoped for the best in this earth of mankind

[Marissa]

I'm not exactly sure with what you mean by do they really mean it there's so many things in this poem...please explain a little more what you mean?

[Laura Maidah]

YOu know, I forgot what i meant. It makes no sense. I'll say what i think now. It's very cute, touching, and I hate the word hubby. It reminds me of a lovesick bunny. Last line is in every song I hate.

[Marissa]

thanks for being honest...it doesn't say hubby it say bubby as in brother or bubba he's just called bubby and if you will read the below review and comment it'll help you understand what this poem is about (: thanks

[Laura Maidah]

You mean the compliments you got? What am I supposed to read?

[Marissa]

No, the review below read my comment it explains what I'm talking about in this poem...the review from southern cross read my comment.

[Laura Maidah]

oh cool. very interesting comment.

[Marissa]

you didn't read it did you?

[Southern Cross]

What a sweet homage to a special friendship

[Marissa]

Yeah, It's nota friendship...he's a little 6 year old who is like my little brother and there's nothing in this world I wouldn't do for me...I guess on it's on level it is a friendship,but it's a little more like a sister/brothership lol...but anyways thank you and I'm glad you like it (:

[Leslie Philibert]

I really like this, and I don`t think the form is sloppy. When I read poems I react with emotion, not intellect, and this is great !

[Marissa]

Aw thank you! I'm glad you like it (:

[That_Girl]

Aww this is adorable! I love it! He is lucky to have you... very nice!

One thing though: "Your* very special to me" - should be you're :)

[Marissa]

thank you! and thanks for the fix (:

[That_Girl]

You're very welcome! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. Good to love someone. Best and easiest gift we can give. Is the gift of love. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Marissa]

thank you for your kind words. And your welcome (:

[afra]

awww so sweet ....i love it ...well done

[Marissa]

thank you! (:

[MOON]

Sweet write, caring and loving beautiful sentiments.

[Marissa]

thank you! (: