Come & Go

Some people come and go,

Why did you have to leave, too?

 

I fell for you,

I fell for us.

 

I look back now,

And I wish you had never come.

 

You had me wrapped around your finger,

Right where you wanted me.

 

I don't regret us,

I regret letting you go.

 

What hurts more than anything,

Is playing back the day I watched you walk away.

 

I lost you,

But you still haven't lost me.

 

I wish I could go back,

And I'd still have you to this day.

 

But now I guess it's time,

I'm not ready...

But this is Good-Bye

 

-I will Always Love you for today,tomorrow, and forever

Author's Note

Please let me know if you need help with an explination....thank you (:

Reviews

[Owlgirl]

This is so sad, and well written. I love it. Amazing how you wrapped up a relatable poem with emotions, a great rythm, and I can clearly visualize the goodbyes.

[Marissa]

Thank You! I was worried about if ya'll would think it's more journal instead of poem good to know you don't....I'm glad you liked it and thank you!

[Owlgirl]

It's a great poem :)

[Marissa]

Aw thank you!

[Dr. Wood ?]

LOVE...the ultimate double edged sword

[Marissa]

YAY!!!! Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

"I will Always Love you for today,tomorrow, and forever"
Most of us wish we could change time and take back words said. I like the thoughts and the desire in this poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Marissa]

Thank You! Glad you liked it...(:

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

its good poem, and it truly describes the love and hurts.. loved it as I write same genre it was good reading this :)

[Marissa]

Thank You!

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

you are welcome :)

[darkness*star1985]

Hey get out of my head. just kidding, Good work, I feel on this one. Love hurts oh to much. I wish i could go back, but we can only go forward.

Excellent words and work. keep up the Amazing work.

[Marissa]

Haha and Thank you!