That Moment:

I think it's pretty explanitory, but if there is any confusion at all message me or comment and I will explain to help.

I'm scared of being happy,

Of what will happen after the moment passes by.

 

The feeling I get in my stomach as I smile.

The thoughts that surround my head as I laugh.

 

It's that thought that I can't get rid of,

The one how I feel like you don't want me happy.

 

I know I'm crazy for thinking that way,

But it's unfortunately how I feel.

 

You see me smiling and laughing with others,

And you try to ruin what happiness I have left.

 

Who cares if they are blood?

To me they will always be my family too.

 

They aren't taking your place,

But your not taking you're place either.

 

I love the moments I have with them,

They care and make me feel like I am something.

 

The moments here with you,

Make me feel like I'm nothing.

 

The only thing now is,

To pray that the moments of happiness...don't pass by.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think....and please excuse any grammar and punctuation.

Reviews

[quixotic_rose]

i like this, but i almost feel as though something is missing from it? or maybe its just me. but it is good.
Sometimes when I write a poem I think too hard on it and in the end it makes the poem a great big mess. So maybe just let the emotions flow more naturally? idk hope that helps somehow!
otherwise..great poem really, keep on going! :)

[Marissa]

I know what you mean and I'll try that......thanks!

[quixotic_rose]

Cool cool :)

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Good start. My advice is to keep writing, read others work, and just be honest/have fun.

-Cord

[Marissa]

thank you...and I will try thanks for the advice.