the foggy dream of comfort..

casper the friendly ghost or the man who walks on the moors the doctor, the kidder or just the neighbor in my dreams my imaginary and not so imaginary friend

you are my realistic fantasy

in my deepest darkest  despair

ill and hardly breathing

you are right behind me

you are the reader of my poems

the listener when i raise my hand or talk to myself.

 you are

the comic to make sure we do not

take ourselves so serously     

nah   it 's nothing much    just a duel with a kitchen tool

you keep quiet

i do not see you

but still

i feel you in my

deepest dream

of intensity and

dark and radiant

funny and tragic

life   at night 

morning or mourning

m sturner  

Reviews

[Ghost]

We are all haunted by something in our life, whether it be real or imaginary it haunts us... It can lurk in the dark, around the corner or stand right behind us but it is there... And I believe it can make or break us at anytime... Thank you for sharing

[marilyn 1225]

thanks for your intelligent ideas yes !!

[barleygirl]

I’m bowled over by how much this describes my best friend who died 3 years ago of severe breathing issues. He was my biggest fan, the kind of friend I hope everyone knows & loves at least once in their lives, for at least some amount of time. Becuz even after such a friend is gone, he/she has taught me to love myself & be my own biggest fan, a lesson that lasts forever (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[marilyn 1225]

your friend must have been a true friend and one fabulous person.. you will never forget him... i did have a friend similar to this but he abruptly left that is life but i try hard not tooooooo feel too sad life has to continue i guess

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love ghosts...have had experiences...those restless spirits linger...and maybe there are ghost readers..why not? we have ghost writers...
i like the idea of morning or mourning...someone reads our poems...

only ghosts don't leave reviews.
j.

[marilyn 1225]

thanks Jacob i have heard of ghost writers appreciate your unghostly comment!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the story in the poetry Marilyn. I liked the thoughts and the secret friend to share your poetry with. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[marilyn 1225]

Thank you very much for liking the thoughts and your kind words as always you are so kind.. m

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your work and you are welcome Marilyn.

[marilyn 1225]

you made my evening thanks soo

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm glad Marilyn.

[Alfred Kukitz]

this is cool. i like the way you embrace the persona you share with us. great write marilyn!

regards,
al

[marilyn 1225]

thanks appreciate your reading and liking my spirit.

[emmajoy]

We all need a friend like that.. or an amalgum of many to give the whole.. such thoughts!
Your words wander with ease, each phrase or sor makeing smile or nod of agreement
Finely put.

[marilyn 1225]

Thanks, Emma Joy.. sometimes the friend may leave but the goodness he has done lasts... i appreciate your reading this and you lovely comments so kind of you..

[¿]

Claps to your wonderful imagination!!👏👏👏
It was nice read😊

[marilyn 1225]

thanks that was fast just wrote it thanks so much for reading and for your kindness!1

[¿]

Wholly my pleasure!!😊