the flower and the next moment

the flower and the next moment

A Poem by marilyn 1225

a dear innocent loving child  of five
finds a dandelion on the ground
and he picks it 
and presents it to a man or woman or many
who are wearing stars
he does so with an open heart
he loves the flower, 
he loves his parents, 
he loves the man with the star

within a moment's time  
gun shots reign
and those who remain upright
march --  march to their gas chambered death

perhaps the little child
did not have to march
but in an instant
all was clearly black
as he held his  precious flower,
ready to give to another,,,


marilyn nepp sturner    2018

© 2018 marilyn 1225


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The gun violence has a grip on the world now, here in our country every day news is filled with victims of this evil act. Most of the stray bullets take children as victims. Your gentle poem paints very powerful images.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

Mrudula, thank you for reading and for your very kind and thoughtful and sad comment
A sad truthful and honest write... This shows that the times of life are harder then it was in the past.. Thank you for sharing

Posted 6 Years Ago


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marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

thanks so much for your insight and kind words.. m
so sad and a tragedy to be witnessed and experienced by a child

Posted 6 Years Ago


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marilyn 1225
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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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