friendship  : ideally that is...

friendship : ideally that is...

A Poem by marilyn 1225
"

the loyalty of true friendship is a gift

"
friendship  :
is the sustaining force of humanity
it should not disappear like a lover's arms
it is there for adversity and good fortune
it sees you thru sickness and rejoices in your
good health and happiness
and in turn you  sincerely love your friend
for his or her kind heart, tolerance, 
 humor and loyalty
in all forms 
times
shapes, sizes, 
and just for the  fun of it
you can play and sing and intertwine souls...

comforting--
maybe not exhallerating like the lover's  words or kisses....
but yet ,it is Steadfast and does not 
get lost ,or does not EVAPORATE
WHILE LIFE GOES ON.....

© 2018 marilyn 1225


Author's Note

marilyn 1225
sad if a lover becomes a stranger but with a friend years can go bye and the solidness and love stays put..

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I understand these differences well. When a friend is converted into a lover, it can never revert back to the same comfortable friendship -- so I say: don't do it! In your poem, it seems you try to justify how friendship is better than having a lover, despite the lack of titillating highs for friendship. Your understated sell-job is actually overselling the advantages of friendship, for sure! *wink! wink!* (((HUG))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


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barleygirl

6 Years Ago

My love life has been sparse & my preference for friendship strong! *wink! wink!*
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

well i can say i have both friend and more to me it is truly remarkable and it will happen t.. read more



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I understand these differences well. When a friend is converted into a lover, it can never revert back to the same comfortable friendship -- so I say: don't do it! In your poem, it seems you try to justify how friendship is better than having a lover, despite the lack of titillating highs for friendship. Your understated sell-job is actually overselling the advantages of friendship, for sure! *wink! wink!* (((HUG))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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barleygirl

6 Years Ago

My love life has been sparse & my preference for friendship strong! *wink! wink!*
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

well i can say i have both friend and more to me it is truly remarkable and it will happen t.. read more
Yes it makes you wonder how a friendship can pickup after years of not seeing one another, but 2 people who were connected in love are distant and less friendly.. Nice write

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

yes friends are all i have these days.. they last
thanks for reading and for your comme.. read more

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Added on March 22, 2018
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marilyn 1225
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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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