you were one fleeting moment of happiness

good night sweet prince

may you dream of your love

may you be in her arms

or in her soul

i will miss you

and miss you

but know 

you are so happy

the way you are

with 

 your life 

your love

and your talents

m nepp sturner  march 6   2018

Reviews

[lightsong]

I don't know why this gives me too, the feeling of mother's loss of her little boy, in all ways these short lines are deeply strong, deeply emotive, they touch with a great amount of sadness... very well written my friend, no doubt it's poured from Your core, all the brightest of wishes I send You*

[marilyn 1225]

thank you for your supreme kindness and compassion thank you for reading this

[lightsong]

You are welcome my friend.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

beautiful unselfishly lovingly written,
love it, thanks for entering it into my competition.

[marilyn 1225]

thank you so much for being KIND

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

lol why did you say i was kind but yes i suppose i am thanks for your kind comments :)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Hmmm sounds like letting go but not wanting to- hard when your heart lies with another’s who’s hearts in someone else’s hands🌹

[marilyn 1225]

agree thanks for reading and being so very accurate and thoughtful...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

I wish u peace love and happiness- always a pleasure🌹

[Richard🖌]

Marilyn,
I cannot begin to tell you of all the fleeting moments of happiness I've shared with someone special since discovering online poetry sites … we poets are a deeply romantic and broadly expressive genre who know how to convey and share our many thoughts, wants, needs, desires, passions, ideals, and fantasies in gloriously appealing ways unique unto us, and when two writers come together, deciding to give give to one another there can be no more splendidly rousing, arousing, or blissful moments, because the infinite power of imagination can take us anywhere and experience all things vividly, even more-so and better than in the every day … we can be and share anything the written word, expressed emotion, and creative imagery could ever be.
The best thing is that we can always recall and enjoy the ambiance of such moments spent with that special one with a glow of sweet satisfaction and bond we've made, we could not have in any other way.
Who, knows, but You, that I may be way off base in my interpretation? I've been told I see everything through amorous eyes, or that I'm too literal to be much of a significant poet … LOL!

Such a gorgeously touching and meaningful poem, Marilyn … I love it dearly! ⁓ Richard ; )

[marilyn 1225]

Richard what a meaningful, thoughtful, beautiful review though it is much more.. i will read this many times over.. and i am thrilled that a writer of your talent loved my poem i can only write under duress, sadness, or while in a super pensive mood.. thanks sooooo much Richard.

[Richard🖌]

Marilyn,
All the inspirations you've mentioned are an intricate part of that which makes poetry feel so deeply real and impacting, beautiful, and alluring to the mind, heart, and emotion.
You are sooo very welcome, Marilyn … anytime! ; )

[marilyn 1225]

sometimes the greatest love can be expressed with poetry sonnets from years back to today's tributes to those who belong in the heart... thank you again

[Richard🖌]

You're ever-so welcome.
Ahhh, the Sonnet!

[marilyn 1225]

yes Shakespeare come to mind

[Richard🖌]

The English [Shakespearean] Sonnet is one of my favorite poetical forms.

[marilyn 1225]

definitely so

[Richard🖌]

I've a number of Sonnets on here.
All my poems' forms each is written in are under their titles, but you'll have to click on Writing next to my profile picture to see them in the list, if you're interested in my Sonnets, that is … LOL!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we can only hope for our children to find what they are looking for...and most of all, find contentment.
j.

[marilyn 1225]

as always, Thank you so much, JACOB.. I can count on you for extremely meaningful comments... you have been a rock!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Sweet, kind and wonderful words.
Coyote

[marilyn 1225]

Coyote, thanks for reading .. you are always so kind in what you say to me... appreciate it!

[sette]

OMG I am really sorry. that is the only word I can say right now.

[marilyn 1225]

THANKS FOR UNDERSTANDING

[sette]

no problem I am just here if you need someone to talk to I will pm you my email address

[marilyn 1225]

OK THANKS