loving son, loving husband , friend, brother uncle and brother in law

loving son, loving husband , friend, brother uncle and brother in law

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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get better revive fool your body and please survive

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unconcious    in a coma
battered body
that knives cut open
now you lie
unknowing and asleep
while those who love you
weep and weep
get better, revive, fool your body and please survive
my friend
my brother   IN LAW
YOU  deserve to live and to
love and to smile  ,
for more than awhile...
asleep in a coma 
the tent gives you air
your heart so big, an advocate
with your kindest , humorous
 care,,
 we wish you God Speed
 we wish you breath
recover,recover
we pray  this night long
that tomorrow
you will wake up
and  talk ---
 twinkle and squawk 
marilyn nepp 2017   nov 12
for jerry  in  the hospital tonight
with love and thank yous
from us all

© 2017 marilyn 1225


Author's Note

marilyn 1225
my brother in law took a turn for the worse today....

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the best people are struck down so early in life...prayers and thoughts are with you and jerry, marilyn...
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

overwhelmed by your kindness, and sensitivity.. yes, my son's middle name is after our dear friend w.. read more

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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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