undeserved  hate for loving silently

undeserved hate for loving silently

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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an attack by words so much hate as a reward for giving my heart way too late in this existence

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what does one do
when   someone you trusted and loved
calls you names beyond cruel
and all that has happened is nothing at all
sitting alone for centuries
not harming a soul
yet lashed out by a someone
with venom , with hate,
words that cut
 to the core
of any person alive now
or before...
one can be shot over and over again
not with a bullet, not stabbed or slaughterded
but with words 

© 2017 marilyn 1225


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Words can be far more damaging.

Great and honest read

Matthew

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Matthew Kult

6 Years Ago

My son is watching Vamperina and I am sitting on live feed picking and choosing what I want to read .. read more
Matthew Kult

6 Years Ago

Since you seemed curious
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

interesting to know that everyone has something ,, living without those people around like you have.. read more
I too have to deal with this from someone close to me. The words still go through my head and it is a fight within myself. Should I believe them? I try not to but it is hard when you are reminded everyday. I really relate to this, great work!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Who said words couldn't cut you in half.
But you must just let it be.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

oh i am at 4 49 pm am okay now... and even happy so ..
anyway thank you u un.. read more
touches me from within because it just happened to me

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dennis N. K

6 Years Ago

Sure, I think I have to cry myself a river...
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

and the river can go on and on from nite to early morning
Dennis N. K

6 Years Ago

hope not I need to move on...but everytime I see her memories reminds me of the tragedy

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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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