the miracle of music

the miracle of music

A Poem by marilyn 1225
"

music sad , loving, having a beat or just having a pattern of notes is a miracle

"

music  transcends time,

space and language

it can flow in Germany, Hong Kong,

Paris , or Japan,

everyone can sing along,or listen

in awe

 to sublime

music 



we must be born

to  be adorned

with songs,  a horn

a flute and the strings

flying thru space

landing at our face into our

ears...


and  delighting  

our bountiful heart


 the music

of yesterday and today

beckons us to

 feel and play


Marilyn  N.S   2017 nov 1, 2017

© 2017 marilyn 1225


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Hey!

Thank you for entering your poem into my competition. I really like that in such a short piece you have conveyed how much music can benefit an individual or society and how it has a global effect.

I really like the rhythm, flow and the energy of it all, you have created musicality within your verses.

Once again, thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

your kind intelligent comment has brightened my first morning of 2018 thank you so much for this .. read more



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I couldn't agree more my friend, I listen to any music, with any language, even if I don't understand the words, as long as it grips my heart, embrace it with the language of the spirits, I believe in the timeless power of music, and what a completely wonderful title You've chosen, beautiful my friend, beautiful to the hearts...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

i love your expressions .. music gripping your heart to'' embrace it with the language of spirits''.. read more
Hey!

Thank you for entering your poem into my competition. I really like that in such a short piece you have conveyed how much music can benefit an individual or society and how it has a global effect.

I really like the rhythm, flow and the energy of it all, you have created musicality within your verses.

Once again, thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

your kind intelligent comment has brightened my first morning of 2018 thank you so much for this .. read more
Definitely. Music can stop you in your tracks.
Take you back in time.
I must admit. I prefer listening to music whilst driving. Though Pink Floyd must be played in the dark.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

lol so true.. that is why the '' oldies but goodies'' remain popular music has no time period..... read more
i really identify with this...i feel music so much, always have...lived with it, by it and in it...
always found it so easy to move to it...love to dance on the dance floor or just in my head...
thanks for this one, Marilyn...
j.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

you are always interesting and oh so positive i am glad that you feel and love music and dancing as.. read more
marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

thanks for reading, Jacob!
All of the above is true and well articulated. Music can soothe and heal and might tame some wild passions. An excellent write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the encouragement, Sami... my self criticism is that the rhythm and rhyme is n.. read more
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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