delicious mirth

delicious mirth

A Poem by marilyn 1225
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ahh a sunny fall day.. and elation even a temporary one is a big surprise!

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catch a bit of sunshine
catch a bright ,strong ray
sing out loud  --beyond the roof tops
happy to be happy, smiling so sublime
soaring spirits  -- Fall lightly ,  for
today---

just a simple ditty
just a silly song
to help  celebrate 
-
temporarily , a child again at play--


smiles are healthy,or so "they" say

smiles  come ,naturally
smiles decidely
smiles contentedly
without  , a question or a doubt
or one  tear....
 
your surprise
has brought me here


marilyn nepp sturner oct 31, 2017   mischief night

© 2017 marilyn 1225


Author's Note

marilyn 1225
the magic of the moment tomorrow may being all other things entirely so i am enjoyng this feeling why not!

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The bets things in life are free Marilyn.
Words too are free and you arrange them beautifully
100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

Ana is a myth. She wrote about squirrels and penguins and snow fairies.
Tony Jordan

7 Years Ago

She sadly succumbed to the dark side and let a troll hare called Dead Alive Dave kill several poems .. read more
marilyn 1225

7 Years Ago

oy oy not good thanks for telling me about ana
when those happy feelings intrude upon the mundane gray...yes, we need to enjoy the moment...embrace it...tomorrow may go back to the other.
j

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

7 Years Ago

always the right response so very accurate and you seem to know me not bipolar but happine.. read more
marilyn 1225

7 Years Ago

'' mundane gray'' so well put... and true most of the time but not today... tomorrow maybe.. read more
Nicely written I liked the descriptions and imagery that you used here

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

7 Years Ago

thank you!! i used to think that i could only write when i was in the throngs of depression but .. read more
The sun does it for me always. Getting dark at five here. Snow on the way. Thinking of hibernating.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marilyn 1225

7 Years Ago

winter or darkness can get you down... and yes, when the sunshine, your heart lightens up a bit! tha.. read more

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Added on October 30, 2017
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marilyn 1225
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was a teacher for years, love books, love art work and swimming I live in NJersey and write free style poems not always with rhyme my friend Dara recommended this site more..

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