'' THERE IS NO OTHER HAND''

NO DESCRIPTION FOR THIS ONE PAIN CAN NOT BE DRAWN ONLY AN ATTEMPT HERE INSTEAD

DON'T CHA COME CRYIN HOME TO ME

PERSON OF MY WRATH

WHEN ALL  YOUR PATHS OF LOVE

HAVE TURNED TO YELLOW

MILK

 THEN YOU HALF HEARTEDLY - TRY ME

DON'T CHA COME CRYING HOME TO ME

PERSON OF MY LOVE

WHEN ALL YOUR JOURNEYS HAVE LEFT YOU  BEHIND

WHEN BOREDOM ENVELOPS YOU

NIGHT TIME BOGS YOU DOWN IN FEAR

AND THEN 

YOU TURN  BACK TO ME

LIFE DID ME IN AWHILE AGO

YOU NEVER CAUGHT ME

AS I LAY DYING

ON THE SHEETS  OF DEATH

ALIVE AGAIN

I CRY  

DONT CHA COME CRYIN HOME TO ME 

MY BOY, THE ONE I LOVED

THE ONE I ADORED,

AND THEN ULTIMATELY, THE ONE i

DISOWNED.............

             OCT 28, 2017      MARILYN NEPP STURNER

Author's Note

JUST A FEELING

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

Reminded me of a phrase that was often spoken by mums to young sons who were always hurting themselves while out adventuring - 'If you fall and kill yourself, don't come running to me!"
Back then we were too dumb to realise the absurdity of such a statement.
Cool lyricism Marilyn

[Tony Jordan]

I have often heard that people write their best in a kind of 'trance state' so that's like the same thing but I have never experienced that and can't relate to it but I do try (sometimes) to write from the heart - is that the same thing....perhaps.

[marilyn 1225]

trance sums it up well lol thanks can not read the rest of your sentence that stops with the word
same it says read more but does not work

[marilyn 1225]

well of course it is from the heart too i think of the poem The Raven may have been written in a trance but his heart rules

[BBP]

I liked the repetition and fierce voice.

Sounded like an old blues aong

[marilyn 1225]

thank you so much BBP !! AND YOU MAY be RIGHT.. OLD BLUES SONGS STILL INSIDE me .. YOU ARE KIND...

[Paul Bell]

Sometimes when you go over the horizon to play away. You find there's no way back when it doesn't pay.

[marilyn 1225]

hmmm interesting i understand the first sentence but its the '' doesn't pay'' part that is puzzling excuse my vapidness... thanks for reading and the kinda sorta fun comment?

[Paul Bell]

Maybe should have said it doesn't pay to get caught.

[marilyn 1225]

lol i agree hence my title but on a sunny day one forgives........ oh my!!

[marilyn 1225]

way too harsh but at the time i just felt like writing this now it is blown away , the sun has risen and life is a fall day!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but honest, and i have these feelings...those who really hurt us, the ones we gave our hearts to totally...they are done...no second chances---
too bad if you don't know what you've got till it's gone...cause it is GONE.

j.

[marilyn 1225]

ps the title, though not in the exact situation, came from the show The Fiddler on the Roof, but you probably knew that..

[marilyn 1225]

thank you for you Kindness!