Missing You

Letting love go is indeed never easy. I must admit, i cant forget my first and last relationship i had..

I can still remember

the times when we were together.

'till now i can't help but ask

Why did you leave me with goodbyes?

 

I keep on saying to myself

that I have to let you go

Even though deep inside

 I still love you so.

 

Alone in my room

Tears keep on falling,

Why did you leave me

Don't you love me anymore?

 

So many times  i asked myself

Was it my fault?

I love you with all my heart

But why did you tear me apart?

 

I cant accept the fact

that you're now in someone else's arms

If i could turn back the time

I still want to make you mine.

 

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

Ah, romantic attachment -- damned if you do, damned if you don't! ;-)

When you're still locked into someone and they stray or otherwise lose the magic, it's just the worst feeling -- aaaarghhh!.

Your poem has the natural elegance of aching timeless simplicity and universality. Most of us have felt this, and for all those in-between, may we find deeper soulmates and be likewise.

Good work.

[Thanatos Darkraven]

Beautiful... Absolutely beautiful... You captured the feeling perfectly. To just be abandoned by the one you love... To be left for dead in the cold world. Wonderful job. Thanks for sharing this one.

[Wondering Mind]

Questions asked at the end of a relationship, very sad aand hurting at first but, with time the answers will come clear.

[Wildecat]

This is a sad poem, hate to see anyone lose the one they love. Great write.

[Jetta Zippora]

I can totally relate! Beautiful write, and I hope you get to live another love story soon! :)