Coming In From the Garage (pondering on thoughts about life)

Coming In From the Garage (pondering on thoughts about life)

A Poem by The Musings of Mary H.

 

Coming In From the Garage
(pondering on thoughts about life)


 

This life has been a peculiar journey
Never knowing what the next minute
Will bring or the people who are in it
In all I have met, heroes I'd like to be
I have found out I could only stay me
Forlorn with the reflection, eyes not lit
Creation of my design, I'm not all legit
I have fooled others and lost my light
Pretending I'm pleased was my choice


 

I now choose to close this repulsive rut
A moment to rupture open and rejoice
I am breaking through the manacles of night
Time to love myself time, a door is shut

© 2008 The Musings of Mary H.


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I LIKE THIS. Self-realization is always a beautiful thing to read about. I celebrate your re-birth into the journey of the new you, on a different path. This is really cool. (I especially like the title...brilliant!)
~Lorraiyne

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you meant "breaking" and not "braking" in the second last line.

I agree with you entirely. We have all hurt people, wanted to be heroes but we are so imperfect. We pretend to be happy (for wahtever reason) when we really aren't. I think its great that you are "rupturing" and rejoicing, it is something alot of us can't do because we are so caught up. Lovely thoughts.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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