Unravel Me

 

 

 I was mistaken

 to let you leave

 I let you leave

 you left

 I'm wrong

 

 I can never dab

 your tears again

 touch your skin

 embrace you as

 

one should be

embraced

 

love you as

 one should be

 loved

 

only you can

 unravel me

untangle this heart

So please say

you love me

 

love me

 

set me free

Reviews

[Lara]

I like the short lines in this poem. Unravel also makes a lovely sound when I say it out loud, the title caught me at once. I love repetition as well because I feel it's very powerful.

[Alexander W. Quinn]

Thought through and very powerful. The short lines gives the read a sense of urgency that flows nicely with the emotions of the poem. Very nice!

[Christina2]

Desperation. Wanting to be loved and needing it so badly. I know the feeling well. I can relate to this very well. Great piece.

[Jacqueline]

So much emotions and urgency...it made me place myself in this person's shoes. Love can be many things and it's scary when you get wrapped up in it. Good drop.