You bring out the-

This is inspired by a poem written by Sandra Cisneros

You bring out the burning rage love in me

The 50 head to ground, knee to floor w***e in me,

Walks in the woods just to cut s**t down in me,

Indiana Jones heart in my hand in me,

Black eyeliner grease smudge in me,

Not showering after sweating in me,

Not showering after sex in me,

Flight that went down model airplane in hand in me,

Squeeze white icing out of tube in me,

Ding ding ding time to fight in me, 

Chained up, gospel singing cryer in me,

going to church during church in me,

Going to the woods during church in me,

The eye of Great Gatsby in me,

Hummingbird's fight for a mate in me,

Walking abdomen first in me,

Hurting you with a hug in me,

Sitting on your lap, 80 pounds heavier, time to man up in me,

Scrambled eggs and fried meat in me,

Eating with my fingers in me,

Sound of hornet's wings in me,

Foreign words that smell like home in me,

Ferocious thunder's lightning rod on pear tree in me,

Write a story about burning in me,

Driving your car fast just so you will tell me to slow down but I don't, in me

Wearing the short black dress for your lust in me,

Dirty fingernails and sweaty armpits in me,

Soldier's swords clash in me,

You bring out the burning rage love in me.

Chemo Iakob...miyvarxar.

Author's Note

This is something that I wrote in my journal about my past love from the country of Georgia. That last line is in the Georgian language. ;)

Reviews

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully and wonderfully captured burning rage love in you. This is a real tour de force of that burning rage love, when passion ignites something from within and your animal is unleashed. I really think you done a great job with the in me endings, I have seen this attempted many times, but rarely pulled off with such clarity, leading urgency to the passion raging within.
This is an exceptionally good write and I thank you for sharing it.

[maricoona91]

Hi,
Wow thank you so much.. it means a lot. I am a very insecure writer and it's nice to hear! And I'm glad that Sandra Cisnero is such an awesome writer that I got to steal from (the "in me'' theme).
Thanks!

[alifeacoustic]

You're very welcome. keep the ink flowing, you're doing a great job.