6 word story

Six feet under. No more worries

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I am an admirer of people who can squeeze much meaning into few words. In this case, I also love that your piece starts with the word "six" & also this is the number of words, like a play on the word "six" . . . which could also be extended to six-six-six, or devil-inspired meanings. This would make "no more worries" a tongue-in-cheek statement, as we feel the devil might be just around the corner! Anyhow, there's so much that can be drawn from these six words. Great job!

[Maria Prikhodko]

Thank you

[Jacob Clifford]

I've seen a few of these "X word story" things before, but this one goes a bit further than most. It has the actual story (the first three words), as well as a little extra.

[Maria Prikhodko]

Yep :) tried to make it straight to the point :D

[Philip Muls]

Ahaha. To the point. The end of consciousness. Let's not bother with any religion or believe in afterlife.

Well done.

[Maria Prikhodko]

Thank you :3

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love this...always like the six word stories...Hemingway would love this too...

less said, but so much philosophy that makes perfect sense.

j.

[Maria Prikhodko]

Thank you :3

[andrew mitchell]

love the dark humour. The brevity is too the point lol

[Bacchus]

Fun, kinda... kinda sad.
Jam packed and makes me think on how to not worry before the grave.

[V]

Blunt, short, expressive. Kind of dark because dealing with death but well expressed. You pack a lot of meaning in just a few lines, I like that.

[Maria Prikhodko]

Thank you :3

[V]

You're welcome. :)

[Jordan Smith]

Wow. Who knew that just six words could change the way you look at something that initially is so depressing to even think about? This story of yours gave me a new perspective on death. Great job with describing raw emotion and showing as much realism in just six words. Wonderful work here June :) Can't wait to see what you have next!

[Maria Prikhodko]

Thank you :)

[Jordan Smith]

Your Welcome :)

[natureislelove]

Lovely....Short and straight to the point. Can't miss-understand anything that's written in this story. Lovely piece. Keep up the good writing.

[A hare off]

A 6 word story about 6 feet under. Those 6 words say it all.

[dan]

A very concise message that seems straightforward but could have underlying meaning; each reader can interpret the piece the way that they see it. Very nicely done. take care...dan

[Maria Prikhodko]

Thank you.