I am an admirer of people who can squeeze much meaning into few words. In this case, I also love that your piece starts with the word "six" & also this is the number of words, like a play on the word "six" . . . which could also be extended to six-six-six, or devil-inspired meanings. This would make "no more worries" a tongue-in-cheek statement, as we feel the devil might be just around the corner! Anyhow, there's so much that can be drawn from these six words. Great job!
I've seen a few of these "X word story" things before, but this one goes a bit further than most. It has the actual story (the first three words), as well as a little extra.
Wow. Who knew that just six words could change the way you look at something that initially is so depressing to even think about? This story of yours gave me a new perspective on death. Great job with describing raw emotion and showing as much realism in just six words. Wonderful work here June :) Can't wait to see what you have next!
A very concise message that seems straightforward but could have underlying meaning; each reader can interpret the piece the way that they see it. Very nicely done. take care...dan