A Darker Shade of Need

A Darker Shade of Need

A Poem by justa335
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...those dark spaces between....

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A darker shade of need,

A sadder state of mind,

A voyage with no destination,

Love and hate entwined.

 

A lonely state of bliss,

An echo left unheard,

An understanding soon forgotten,

The kind of death preferred.

 

The ache of empty arms

As he turns away to leave,

But you will mask the pain you feel

In secret, you will grieve.

 

A game of solitaire

Where the ace of hearts will bleed,

But the urge to cheat is in every hand,

….It's a darker shade of need.



 

© 2015 justa335


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Bravo! Masterfully written, philosophically deep and gripping. You write with a lot of emotion and down to earth wisdom that gives your work an enlightened sense that reaches into your readers. I am looking forward to reading more of your work, Thank you for posting so we can all enjoy your work :~)

Posted 9 Years Ago


justa335

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Bear.
This is a fabulous write my fellow wordsmith! The ending has an eery feel to it that is delicious. Good luck in this challenge! ~Sharon

Posted 9 Years Ago


justa335

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Miss Sharon!

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Added on August 16, 2015
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Paranaque City, Metro Manila, Philippines



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