F**K *

holy angry 2 years ago much?

F**K YOU 
F**K HER 
F**K THE LOVE I PUT IN YOUR HEART -

 - THAT YOU'RE NOW GIVING TO HER

I TAUGHT YOU THAT S**T

THE MEANING OF IT

AND FROM THE SWEETNESS TO THE SEX
I F*****G SHOWED YOU ALL OF IT

 

it's funny how you think

that it's real, what she's giving you back in return

 

SHE'S STILL IN LOVE WITH HER EX

SHE'S CHEATED ON YOU

 

now how does that feel,

                       tell me,

 

tell me,

 

                               does it

                               [burn?]

Author's Note

i don't care that i said it a million times, or how it's formatted, it made me feel better.

Reviews

[chris' girlfriend]

wow!!!!
great poem... so powerful ^_^

[Christina]

i've definitely been there...you said everything you needed to say and hey, the profanity is understandable you were pissed.
still a great poem...good job.

No matter how times you said it at times you have to say it a million times. It truthly makes you feel better in a way. Good poem Mariah :)

[John Miller]

I assume this was written after the end of a nasty relationship.

It's always nice to release ones feelings through poetry. If you do not release those feelings, your brain may explode. And that is a very rotten mess to clean up. Nice poem.

[David Young]

You go girl. *Z snap*

[MorganLyn]

way to vent... I saw your anger.. u almost made me feel it as weel..
screw him..lol

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

yeah, therse nothing better than a rage poem.
ive written quite a few of those myself.

[NCPanthersgurl]

Wow you seriously don't have luck in the man department =[ I know how that goes!! *tears* But letting it out through poetry is the best way.

What would be even better is if you got rich and famous off this poem and you could go back and say ha fool, I'm rich AND over you.

haha =]

[Jessica L Auster]

I like how you tell it straight up. I can relate, sadly, but we all get through it.

[LostCauze[:P]]

Raw emotion, and nicely formatted. Usually when someone just pours their emotions out into poetic form, its usually not neat and doesn't flow. But what you wrote was neat and flowed very well. Keep writing.