What I Wont Say

( unspoken sentiments )

Your Beautiful 

the way you stare

straight  into my -- forever

the way you never miss a blink

never missing a second 

of me being - 

and breathing 

- and being woman 

your beautiful , you know 

the way you adorn my affirmations 

like adjectives do nouns and pronouns in complex sentences 

the way you smile in darkness 

the way you laugh in uncertainty 

the way you light lucent

guiding my hop- scotched  feet 

Your unwavering  and expounding 

  your giant hands holding firm to my history and  my now  and 

my bandaged imperfections 

the way you predicate my subjects 

and plural my singulars 

Your Beautiful 

Reviews

[Rachel Rashid]

Very smart and beautiful wordings

[Mariah Slade]

thanks rachel

[Sumo]

Again, I love it. Clever use of sentence structure as the metaphor.