Rain

Children's poetry

Cloudy skies,
flashing lights at far zig zagging,
loud sounds,thunderstorms,
puddles, muddy soil.
Drip, drip, drip, drop
drip, drip, drip, drop

Dancing drops on my umbrella.
Dancing drops on the sidewalk.
Dancing drops are everywhere.
Drip, drip, drip, drop.
Drip, drip, drip, drop,
is the sound the drops make.

Water on my hair and lashes.
Water on my face and neck.
Water running down my body.
Water soaking all my clothes.
Swish, swash,swish, swash,
water squirts out of my shoes
shivers, and a...a... a... choooo!
a...a...a...chooo!

Maria Fischinger. 2006

© 2008 Maria Fischinger

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Bhavya Kaushik

Its such a cute piece.
Lovely use of onomatopoeia.
great read!

Posted 17 Years Ago

Lydia Shutter

Splendid onemotopeia in this children's poem! Contagious rhythm to your words. I enjoyed this tremendously. Lydia

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 5, 2008
Last Updated on February 6, 2008

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Maria Fischinger

Chicago, IL

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