Angels

Angels

A Poem by Margarita Miranda
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The way I'm described and the I see myself

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I am always compared to one. 
So pure and innocent.
How can I commit so many sins?
I am an Angel 
Why do I feel like a demon? 
I am an Angel 
Why am I always left behind? 
I am Angel without wings 
And without the love 
From the ones I love. 
I am an Angel with a Demon inside. 

© 2015 Margarita Miranda


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Very beautiful write written with your heart. Enjoyed reading it. You`ve got nice insights `bout perceiving the glory of yous. Nice imagery!

Ps. Dear, in this line: "I an Angel without wings", I`m sure, with your fast typing, you just typed 'N' instead of "M" so, beautiful Margarita, correct that tiny typo. I`m glad to notify you `bout that.

Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I loved this how you stated what you qualities were and why you refuted them...the ending was perfect...very good read and the opening lead us to the conclusion that you wanted us to know....very good work

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, this id pretty good! I pray not for your sake! Well written, thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on February 8, 2015
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Margarita Miranda
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I'm 17 and I like writing poetry and I hope you enjoy it more..

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