where the wolf howls

random poem i heard in one of my dreams

save me from the nightmares 

save me from the pain 

let me go and scream

let me run away

to where the wolf howls 

a song of sorrow

where the birds don't sing

today or tomorrow 

where the angels cry

cause they've lost their wings 

where the demons weep 

cause they've heavenly rings

where the angels cry

cause theyv'e 

lost their wings

where the demons weep 

cause they've heavenly rings

thats where i'll be

the day you leave

don't say you won't

i know its a lie

don't say you won't

its another mind game 

but i know you will return

plunging icy steal bringing crimson flood

thats where i'll be the day you leave

thats where i'll be the day i die

where the wolf howls 

a song of sorrow

where the birds don't 

sing today or tomorrow

where the angels cry

cause they've lost their wings

where the demons weep

cause they've heavenly rings

my lifeless corpse 

in dark moonlight

under black rain  

the flow washing over you

you'll feel the burn like acid

washing your memory pure

my face fading away

gone with your last memory's

thats where i'll be 

the day you leave

the day i die 

the day you lose your last memories

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

a song of sorrow.
Just beautiful

[marie]

thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome

[Xerclipse]

Sadness, fear, darkness, thats what I usually love in a poem. This was really great. Nice set of details and atmosphere of the night

[marie]

thanks a bunch!!!

[Xerclipse]

np ;)

[marie]

:)

[eeoopig]

Wow this is a beautiful, yet sad poem - I love it! My favourite lines were:
"where the angels cry
cause they've lost their wings
where the demons weep
cause they've heavenly rings"
I don't know why though, I just seem to like them - good work, another one for my library! :D

[marie]

thank you :)

[Eagle Cruagh]

Sad, melancholy and creative.
'The story of a romance that has
foundered, has gone on the rocks.
The language is creative and romantic
as well as descriptive and exquisite.
Thank you,
---- John

[marie]

thank YOU

[Stanley Wilson]

wow beautiful and descriptive marie, lovely poem thoughts about a relationship thats changing???? really good i remember being told to keep a pen and pad handy you never know when things inspire you.

[marie]

thank you i will keep that advice in mind

[Bare trees]

This is a very moving piece by you Marie. And you got it all from a dream? Wish I could do that.

[Tomi]

Very Good Writing this is.....Very somber but yet beautiful..Well done and thanks for sharing

[marie]

no problem it is one of the few things that get to me

[marie]

love this song it always seems to calm me down