On her way

On her way

A Poem by Princess152

The princess calls me out tonight 
She looks so beautiful, strong and bright
Tears stream down my face 
As I look at my darling with her shining knight

taking her away 
shes so beautiful today 
I know he'll love you till the end 
Forever, we'll be friends

Baby, Its hard to see you go 
Leaving us for this young lad
You wont be around, but i'll be glad 
You deserve more than this whole world 
Show mummy everything you hold

My darlings leaving 
to start her life
I can tell you, this one thing 
She will be the most amazing wife

taking her away 
Shes so beautiful today 
I know he'll love you till the end
Forever, we'll be friends

© 2011 Princess152


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This really got to me, being the father of a 20 year old daughter. It is beautifully written, very moving, especially for those of us that have watched our children go off on their own. Although it's much different, I have a similar poem. Perhaps you'd read it? http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/jimparson/660757/

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Princess152
Princess152

Auckland, north island, New Zealand



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I love writing taking photos I am a crazy romance freak and i almost always write fairytales I always get hurt and throw my emotion into all my work. I hope you enjoy it! more..

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