A mysterious world

The image of what heaven will be like, and Gods response to me.

As I look around 
this unfamiliar place

I see no one 
only his holy face 

lights shining 
oh so bright

with glitter sparkling
in the day light

the golden beams
and platinum seams

cotton wool like atmosphere 
i breathe
deeply

diamond throne of pure existence
Violet Velvet robes capture my soul 

as i see four white doves 
fly ahead in the distance

Wait for me, I shout and cry
but
nothing
no reply

everything is perfect 
and so sacred 

i hear a voice up ahead
you are clean 
new
and full of life
welcome home my child

Reviews

[Jim Parson]

Now I know what to expect when I get there. Beautifully done! Your visual is perfect. You got away from the rhyme scheme you had in the opening stanzas, which was a little off-putting, but as I read on, your lovely words made it no longer matter. Well done!