did you just forget

did you just forget

A Poem by Luis Alonso Zelaya
"

i don't know, i was 19 when i wrote this.

"

 

 

it must be the alcohol, come back later

and take a stab at it.

where is the dot?

what is it with this opposite lines

anyway

don’t brake the norms on a

standard society based on lies and

hypocritical ideas of mental control

capitalized on sanctions abused by the

delete button. Spit

vomit. control

echo. can this really be if with out a

a single look at the screen

the sound automatically rearranges itself

you are nothing but a

humiliation. not a word.

© 2008 Luis Alonso Zelaya


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Intense, honest, explosive!!! I love the voice this screams with ... Nicely done!

Posted 16 Years Ago


this is excellant! i love the imagery anda your very good at expressing such powerful emotion!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 23, 2008

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Luis Alonso Zelaya
Luis Alonso Zelaya

Houston, TX



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a radioactive spider bit me when i was in high school. i write with the same pen all the time; the uniball "signo" gell grip 0.7. when i like something, i get indubitably excited about it. or so i'm.. more..

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