Dark Rain Box

- An Alternative Rock Song Lyrics inspired from my Poem "Box Rain Dark"

Dark Rain Box  

Marc Marlon Villaflor

Dark Alternative Rock Song

I

Shut the door, smashing sound in the hallway

That night we have to say goodbye

Turning down your wish of staying for another day

I am tired of living in this endless lies

All we’ve got is heartaches when we cry

II

Stepping down the stairs it breaks my heart

Remembering those days when we were together

Remembering those kisses that promised a new day

Each moment’s last, pictures perfect

Do you hear me? Hear my voice, before I say

Chorus

A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight

Bridge

 

Storms, big waves and earthquakes

I’m wondering if we could build a life together

 

Space, empty room and box

Now my life has no direction

 

Clouds rain and tears

Now I have lost you

 

Dark Rain Box Goodbye my love

 

Chorus

  

A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

 The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

 Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

 Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight

 

 

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I love the title and the lyrics fit perfectly, you've done a great job here Marc. So true, some people, no matter how much they love one another just aren't good for each other, I think your words will resonate with a lot of people, I know they do for me. Excellent my friend!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Frie, love your words :) thanks a lot.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Marc, good to see you back here, always my friend :-)

[Jack...]

This is structured very well my friend. The sadness is relatable and hits home hard, but still in the bridge we find some hope, perhaps a way to stop the storms. Would love to hear the melody.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sir Jack :) I appreciate your thought and I am very thankful.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hi Guys I appreciate if you can give me your honest thought in this piece, it is a lyrics for my new song composed for an alternative indie rock artist. Thanks a lot for the reads.