Dark Rain Box

- An Alternative Rock Song Lyrics inspired from my Poem "Box Rain Dark"

Dark Rain Box  

Marc Marlon Villaflor

Dark Alternative Rock Song

I

Shut the door, smashing sound in the hallway

That night we have to say goodbye

Turning down your wish of staying for another day

I am tired of living in this endless lies

All we’ve got is heartaches when we cry

II

Stepping down the stairs it breaks my heart

Remembering those days when we were together

Remembering those kisses that promised a new day

Each moment’s last, pictures perfect

Do you hear me? Hear my voice, before I say

Chorus

A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight

Bridge

 

Storms, big waves and earthquakes

I’m wondering if we could build a life together

 

Space, empty room and box

Now my life has no direction

 

Clouds rain and tears

Now I have lost you

 

Dark Rain Box Goodbye my love

 

Chorus

  

A dark goodbye to you my love, a darkest hour with you my love

 The rain of fire, the rain of fire, I am completely out of your sight

 Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

 Dark Rain Box, Dark rain Box, those memories shape our fate tonight

 

 

 

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I love the title and the lyrics fit perfectly, you've done a great job here Marc. So true, some people, no matter how much they love one another just aren't good for each other, I think your words will resonate with a lot of people, I know they do for me. Excellent my friend!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Frie, love your words :) thanks a lot.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Marc, good to see you back here, always my friend :-)

[Mother Maggie]

Beautiful...you're work is very sublime

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

The picture and it's quote and the poem itself fit each other, nice write.

[TL Boehm]

Storms, big waves and earthquakes
I’m wondering if we could build a life together

Chaos is chaos whether in nature or relationships it can be beautiful but savage. Well penned

[jacob erin-cilberto]

quite nice...like gabrielle...i was trying to think of music to go along with...

i feel a cross between Moody Blues and Pink Floyd.

this will get music eventually, Marc.

[gabrielle]

i am actually thinking/humming of a melody that might fit the lyrics... very catchy chorus =)

[Mike Emil]

like the smashing
like the storms
HAI!!!
good for E/A/B chords

[Mark]

A dark rain box... love that image!

[gombeggar]

i'd more then likely have to hear this presented to make an avid comment

[icelandicblue]

There is truth and sorrow in this poem. They are dark time when love is not enough. I loved this line from the poem:

Box an empty space, a place where I say my final goodbye

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ice :)

[Leslie Philibert]

As Frieda notes, a great job, the structure perfect for a song, the rhymes excellent. I would ( as a failed songwriter) repeat the Chorus after the Bridge, so that the bridge leads either to a new verse or the refrain. Excellent.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thank you Sir :) great inputs I will do it.