Bittersweet

Song Lyrics

 

 

Oh...Oh...Oh...Lah… lah...lah…lah.

The pouring rain, the strong wind rushing cold into my skin

A lonely heart looking through the window, precious moment when I am with you

So look at me, look at me, while you saying you love me, is it me inside your heart?

Oh please, Oh Baby Baby... Oh Baby tell me honestly

 

Here I am, here I am brushing aside the pain I am getting through, as I walks into square room

Things sync into my mind, creating dark bittersweet of big boom

So I am looking at, looking at the wall we used to bend our desires,

But right now, right now, all I have got are traces of faded fires

 

Run…Run…Run…while I was freezing in the winter pain

Run…Run…Run...While this heart of mine keep on dreaming

Run..Run…Run…Running excited in the pouring rain

Run…Run…Run…Running breathlessly to catch the last train

 

Don’t ask me; don’t tell me, really don’t think about of me

I am over now; all I have is a bittersweet memory.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[B-poet]

This is an emotional intriguing write. Being heartbroken isn't the best feeling in the world. Yet that pain will lead to a new & more fulfiling relationship if you can withstand the short hurtful storm of a
break-up. Great work Marc. A compelling read. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bpoet :)

[gabrielle]

though the last line states that the voice is all over, taking the whole content of the piece would state otherwise. but who would openly and sincerely admit that he's already move on? i'd love to hear the song version of this.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gab :) later I will post the song.

[TL Boehm]

this is very lyrical. I cut my teeth on poetry by writing sucky lyrics. This is not 'sucky.'

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks TLB :)

[Inspiring Writer]

Very touchable write you made this time, every word's cool and nicely written. Great job once again.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks IW :)

[gombeggar]

don't use 'pls' unless that was just an overlooked typo...very nice work would do well 2 music me thinks

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gom :) copy I will edit it.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow, bro. You're soaring high like an eagle. From fashion photographer to song-writer. Ha! I'm gonna welcome you with a band when you come home. LOL. Gaano ba kalayo ang Bacolod sa Roxas, Oriental MIndoro? Hehehe. Basta, sa lahat ng writers dito, tayo ang magkapitbahay. Hehehe. Kala ko, ayaw mo na dito. Like you before, here I am, quiet and no writings at all. Buti na lang may FB.

This is great. I like to hear the notes of this song. I'm proud of you, bro. Keep it up!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol Thanks Dhaye :)

[Mark]

Lots of action in this poem. Lots of fond memory mixed with a sadness. It feels like a song. A nice write. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sir Mark :)

[Eddie Phillips]

Marc, it has been a while since I got to read your writing. I enjoyed this immensely. Thanks for sharing it.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. Eddie

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Perfection - a telling and poised piece that really seeps into ones mind among other things!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Thom :)

[s y e]

Ha, I actually sang this to myself with a little melody I made up and never realised I was actually singing it out loud until my brother walked in and looked and me like I was crazy, anyway such lovely, beautiful lyrcs, Marc.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Noodlehead

[Frieda P]

Oh I could definitely hear this one in my head Marc...heartbreak is always a strong refrain.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Frie :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure Marc, now I want to hear you belt it out! ;-)