Bittersweet

Song Lyrics

 

 

Oh...Oh...Oh...Lah… lah...lah…lah.

The pouring rain, the strong wind rushing cold into my skin

A lonely heart looking through the window, precious moment when I am with you

So look at me, look at me, while you saying you love me, is it me inside your heart?

Oh please, Oh Baby Baby... Oh Baby tell me honestly

 

Here I am, here I am brushing aside the pain I am getting through, as I walks into square room

Things sync into my mind, creating dark bittersweet of big boom

So I am looking at, looking at the wall we used to bend our desires,

But right now, right now, all I have got are traces of faded fires

 

Run…Run…Run…while I was freezing in the winter pain

Run…Run…Run...While this heart of mine keep on dreaming

Run..Run…Run…Running excited in the pouring rain

Run…Run…Run…Running breathlessly to catch the last train

 

Don’t ask me; don’t tell me, really don’t think about of me

I am over now; all I have is a bittersweet memory.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[B-poet]

This is an emotional intriguing write. Being heartbroken isn't the best feeling in the world. Yet that pain will lead to a new & more fulfiling relationship if you can withstand the short hurtful storm of a
break-up. Great work Marc. A compelling read. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bpoet :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You can feel the beat in this one...the words play out in the lines...your chorus...has a vibe and the only thing missing is the musical accompaniment with this one...the meaning catches you...

[Ken Simm.]

I once said that any song with Baby in the lyric could not be good. I was wrong then, I'm even more wrong now. This is very good.

[Mother Maggie]

Amazing work. Is this the memory of a lost love?

[Nick.B]

Interesting song, very sad and heartbroken, shows the world how it is....

[Ency Bearis]

Nice job with this lyrical presentation .

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and poetry led the reader on a sad journey. Sometime we must fall to the lowest levels to be able to reach out again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Pax]

wow, a lyrics... may melody ba? i like the bitter-sweet tone of flow in the poem's intent... a sad ends can also lead to new begginings... very nice!

[MI-KOL HIGHLY]

sweet........don't we all go through this at least once in our lives.

great write.

[Ravyne Hawke]

I really love the emotions poured into this one, Marc. It would be interesting to hear it set to music, or even as a spoken piece with the emotions in all the right places. My own reading aloud could never do it justice. Wonderful work!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Lori :) appreciate your time readin this lyrics :) thanks a lot.