Spirit of the Moth

Ano tong pic, wala naman sa truck. hehe.Lol. :) Pang-cover page mo na

lang yan.

Lagay ka ng iba dito sa chapter I mo, yung nasa truck. Hehe. Pwede rin

yan, basta lagay ka nung about checkpoint para tamang-tama.

"wondering what will happened"---wondering what will happen

Naiintriga ako dito sa new work mo ha? Bakit ang lawak ng concept mo?

Internet na yata yang utak mo. hehe. All categories and genre ka ha?

Good job, pare ko. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

HI Thanks for the Reads, I welcome bad and good review, just be honest.

Posted 11 Years Ago

arrgh!
chapters are mor than one page

Posted 11 Years Ago

Sad tales, war can leave some really personal trauma...great work

Posted 11 Years Ago

i like the title ~ another book ~ hmm ~ Buti ka pa ~ keep on writing kahit wala pa yung ending yung ibang mong book atleast nakaka pagsulat ka parin hehe~ joke lang ~ but really i like the starting , i need sometime ~ perhaps bukas...:D

Posted 11 Years Ago

You write in an eclectic style, the reader themselves can piece together what happened and I like that - fiction with a realistic, thought demanding edge. You write well. Keep it up Marc :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

ok...

Posted 11 Years Ago

A minute of drama held in wonderful timeless consideration. Terror writ large and excellent words to picture this moment picked out. I want to know what happens next but please Marc keep this format. It works so well. Snapshots of terror putting us all on empathic edge.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Ano tong pic, wala naman sa truck. hehe.Lol. :) Pang-cover page mo na

lang yan.

Lagay ka ng iba dito sa chapter I mo, yung nasa truck. Hehe. Pwede rin

yan, basta lagay ka nung about checkpoint para tamang-tama.

"wondering what will happened"---wondering what will happen

Naiintriga ako dito sa new work mo ha? Bakit ang lawak ng concept mo?

Internet na yata yang utak mo. hehe. All categories and genre ka ha?

Good job, pare ko. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago