Mystic Spells

Mystic Spells

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor

Sitting here, waiting for you to come out into the light

I am not sure if these things will work out right

 

My heart beats faster than a subway train

I am here asking for your love in this  pouring rain

 

You’re beautiful in my eyes and your love is strong

 

Please hold me tight as we dance in this lovely song

 

Now hear the beat of my heart, catch the rhythmic beat of my desire

Now feel the love I have inside, succumb to my burning fire

 

Are you ready? Kiss me, taste my sweet divine

Drink my liquid like an Italian red wine

 

Unite your strength into my mine for this love will never ends

Give me your love as I give you mine, our love that flawlessly blends

 

Look, look at me, visualize my majestic likeness

Follow; follow me into the trance of my wishes

 

Open your eyes, closely look at my face

Hold me tight, as we fly into this endless space

 

In my dream we were lock in a dissimilar translation

Forever you will be tied up in my future revelation

 

I muttered the mystical spells, our universe accelerates

Our future will be fulfilling, our love  will resonate

 

Spellbound.

 

 

(c) Marc Marlon Villaflor All rights reserved

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


Author's Note

Marc Marlon Villaflor
My concept love story in a new level of defining love through spells.


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The only change I can see to make is in the word, "tights," just remove the "s" at the end and you're golden.

The poem is beautiful, Marc, absolutely gorgeous. Your metaphors are brilliantly illustrated and you draw an exacting picture of a magical love. I need some of that potion! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Lol thanks hun, :) I am happy reading your honest reads. Thank you.



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That was a very beautiful poem, great job! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks LSD :) I appreciate your precious words for this piece.
Now in this piece I find you, unencumbered. I like reading you.
Mesmerizing piece filled sensuality and promise. :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Rouge, very thankful for your honest review. :)
Hi Marc,
An interesting flowing and romantic poem. A few syntax suggestions:
Seating here, waiting-either Seated here or Sitting here will do.
in a pouring rain-either in the pouring rain or in this pouring rain.
You are very near but seems so far-You are very near but seem so far
till the world end-till the world ends
our love that flawlessly blend-our love that flawlessly blends
into the endless space-either into endless space or into this endless space
our love will resonates-our love will resonate

This line I could not quite understand, Open your eyes, close, open it, and see my face


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. John :) your suggestion is awesome.
John Alexander McFadyen

11 Years Ago

You nailed that confusing line Marc and it reads so much better.
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Yes Sir, lol sorry for that lines it is really confusing, glad you identify it. :) thanks for the su.. read more
interesting piece...first line did you mean "sitting here"?

i like the near rhyme in the piece...once in awhile the rhyme feels a bit forced, but form will cause that.

i like the end word...but for symmetry, would like to have seen a word at the beginning, by itself, to keep the rhyme symmetry that you created.

but some spell binding lines.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


Romance and passion flood this piece - beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Ms. Rita :) time of love lol :)
Follow me into the trance of my wishes. Very nicely done Marc. Look out ladies, Marc is here.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Lol :) thanks Mr. Jack but you are there also hehehe.
Jack...

11 Years Ago

Yeah my friend, but I had my heart ripped out of my chest today, so my take may become slightly dark.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:) Have a nice day Sir Jack thanks again for the reads and take care your heart.
"Unite your strength into my strength till the world end

Give me your love as I give you my love, our love that flawlessly blend



Look, look at me, visualized my majestic likeness ."
Those lines stood out for me dear poet in this nice , well written poem...:)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Brother :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure . Any time...:)

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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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