Mystic Spells

Sitting here, waiting for you to come out into the light

I am not sure if these things will work out right

 

My heart beats faster than a subway train

I am here asking for your love in this  pouring rain

 

You’re beautiful in my eyes and your love is strong

 

Please hold me tight as we dance in this lovely song

 

Now hear the beat of my heart, catch the rhythmic beat of my desire

Now feel the love I have inside, succumb to my burning fire

 

Are you ready? Kiss me, taste my sweet divine

Drink my liquid like an Italian red wine

 

Unite your strength into my mine for this love will never ends

Give me your love as I give you mine, our love that flawlessly blends

 

Look, look at me, visualize my majestic likeness

Follow; follow me into the trance of my wishes

 

Open your eyes, closely look at my face

Hold me tight, as we fly into this endless space

 

In my dream we were lock in a dissimilar translation

Forever you will be tied up in my future revelation

 

I muttered the mystical spells, our universe accelerates

Our future will be fulfilling, our love  will resonate

 

Spellbound.

 

 

(c) Marc Marlon Villaflor All rights reserved

Author's Note

My concept love story in a new level of defining love through spells.

Reviews

[jkhatz]

The only change I can see to make is in the word, "tights," just remove the "s" at the end and you're golden.

The poem is beautiful, Marc, absolutely gorgeous. Your metaphors are brilliantly illustrated and you draw an exacting picture of a magical love. I need some of that potion! :D

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol thanks hun, :) I am happy reading your honest reads. Thank you.

[s y e]

Very romantic, a lovely love poem. Very well written.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hi N.H looks pretty in your avatar, thanks for your precious time. I always appreciate your kind words.

[s y e]

Hey, haha, thank you, Marc.

And, you're welcome, anytime.

[Leslie Philibert]

like the verse form, good one !

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sir Leslie :) appreciate your time and kind words.

[Pax]

wow ~ a romantic poem ~ very endearing kabayan ~ what can i say romance is in the air ;D Brilliant!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Pax hehehe kung sa Visaya guin lumay lol :)

[Pax]

lol ~ gi lumay... marunong ka pala ...hehe ~ segoro maraming bisaya rin dyan sa dubai ~ im sure kasi dyan nag wowork yung mga classmates ko at isang cousin ko rin... and your welcome :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Heheh :) hindi bero lang pero alam ko may ganun sa atin di ba? lol

[Pax]

yes ang dami ~ you know we have many superstitious belief ~ some we choose to ignore and some we choose to indulge ~ otherwise it's up to us ~ :D

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol oo nga it is more fun in the philippines. :)

[Pax]

LOL ~ yan motto na yan ~ naging thread na sa pinas...hehe

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

oo lol :)

[Ency Bearis]

Beautiful metaphor, such so romantic. Pleasure to read.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sir Ency, though I am not sure when I wrote this piece if the readers will like it, glad you like Sir. :)

[Ency Bearis]

A great piece Marc and well presented. And, you're welcome.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) thanks again

[PossiblyAlice]

I like the elegant simplicity, you have much potential :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks WC :) I appreciate your kind words. :)

[icelandicblue]

I found the ending to the poem to be the most beautiful part:

I muttered the mystical spells, our universe accelerates
Our future will be fulfilling, our love will resonates

Spellbound.

That was fabulous.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ice :) appreciate your kind words.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

The last half of the poem simply sang to me. I really like when you dig deep and bring out the interesting and new feelings of love and almost "cosmic intensity". The first half of the piece has a few "cliche" moments, but I do like the feeling of the piece as a whole.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks GF, glad you enjoy it, appreciate your kind words.

[Charliee]

This is very good!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Charliee :)

[Imara]

Great job, I love the simple straitforward way you went about talking about this. Simply stating your feelings for this girl. I must say that the first 3 stanzas are my favorite. Great job, there in't too much more that I can say about this piece. The rhyme is great and you have excellent imagery. Good Job :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks Imara, though I am little hesitant posting this, I thought this will not work out but I am wrong upon reading your review :) thanks a lot friend.

[Imara]

Never hesitate to post, if you think its bad that what we review for. So you can make it better :) Keep up the great work

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Imara you makes me brave enough lol :) thanks for the spirit boaster!

[Imara]

:) Welcome