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The Great War accelerates the serpent’s falls

Causing destructions of all empires walls

The serpent incites war and the majestic invasion.

The snakes pierce the bastion of aeon

The desert eagles unified with the serpents

Infusing blood along the whole continents

The eagles build the realm of greatness

Protecting the trade and exploiting the wilderness

The crescent moon watching the eagle’s kingdom to fall

The twin merchant brothers has collapse before autumn’s roll

The clusters of eastern stars granted the downfall

The eagle fought back with no reflection

Destroyed the pillar of stars and brought retribution

Queen Sheba's firstborn killed and his soul derelict in the ocean

His heroism celebrated by most of the crescent man.

The eastern cosmos  have thousands, thousands of newly born stars.

But the eagles in the west have never been defeated as his kingdom is advancing to mars.

The defiance of the East and the authority of the West will cycle the thirst of blood

Behold the power of the new born dragon echoes in his lunatic clad

The eagles change his direction to the Pacific cluster of stars.

He kept an eye to the dragon's proxy as he might goad for a war.

The eagles might be strong, but the stars, the moon, the dragon is imminent threat

The eagles still fly, watching, he might fall, but he will not retreat.

 

Reviews

[Aramey]

The dragon- North Korea? I do think the symbolism here was excellent. I'm working on one about "the eagle" myself. In fact I'm concerned that if the Eagle doesn't learn to fly in a flock the scattered stars will win under his majestic watch, against the odds. As far as this however, I loved it and it made a lot of sense. Great write!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Aramey thanks for the reads, as I emailed you the details of the dragon, pls. don't hesitate to ask more if you need to discover the symbols of this piece.

[Sami Khalil]

This sounds like an Armageddon in the making or the coming one which is written in a great style and wiords...Always a pleasure to read your work...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. but some already happened :)

[Sami Khalil]

I see it . You are right... More signs on the horizon...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes :) The newly born star in the east keep duplicating.

[Sami Khalil]

Yes...The future looks bleak but we can hope for the best...Or maybe go to Mars...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) The Eagle will win in the end.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Marc, I am exhausted after reading this piece. So much going on, imagery and message. Your first and last lines: "The war in cosmos makes the serpent fall, followed by invasion... The eagles still fly, watching, even in his fall, he will not retreat" perfectly encompass the message.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ms. Rita :) love your review :)

[Mark]

I think your imagery is great, the message was mostly understandable (what wasn't understood may be because I live under the eagle?) There are some grammatical and spelling errors all through the work though. For instance Dessert eagles.... dessert is a usually a sweet dish served after a main meal in the U.S., like cake, ice cream, pie... I think what you meant here was desert ... a place with little water and lots of sand.

Enjoyed the read though as I'm always interested in hearing the opinions of people who do not live in the U.S. regarding what my country does or contemplates.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol :) I oversight the words lol anyway thanks I change it already. Thanks for the reads Sir. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This is what happening today.

[Talal Hussain]

Great work....excellent selection of words :-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Talal :)

[Inda]

Stubborn Empire refuses to fall?
That's what I get from this.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes brother you got it :)