Fullmoon, the Game of the Guardians.

The night comes with a lurid full moon

The wolf's howling makes the villager swoon

Nocturnal wings flying sporadically in the cataleptic skies

The sounds of chaos is imminent from the distance miles

The villagers frighten for the arrival of malevolent shadow

He brought nightmares, even killed the tamed breath in the meadow

The Monster forays once again, breaks the wall and captures a woman.

The lady screams loudly, seems there is no way to run.

The Beast severely deep-rooted his fangs into her neck

The woman lost her breath in  a disastrous peak.

The blood strewn all over the base, slowly scattered everywhere.

Causing a horrific death in this gloomy  wicked sphere

The Beast ended his victim by removing her heart with his monstrous paw

Then dropped his prey, he roars, reverberate fears,  reaching the devilish crow.

Chaos is his nature, strikes death in every place.

He fulfills his destiny and follows his kindred wishes

Suddenly the beast detects the arrival of his enemies’ wagon

The guardians open the door, flying sword and silver bullets heading to one direction.

The Monster is quick to leap upward, evades the silver death wisely

He breaks the asbestos roof by his claws, jumping from place to place till he’s free

He fades into the dark realm, wildly victorious and still reign in the dark.

The Guardians failed to kill the Monster; it makes the future looks stark

But still, this is not the end of the game, until the next full moon.

Before the dawn comes, the Guardians will kill this hideous black hairy demon.

The Next Full Moon

Reviews

[Imara]

"The wolf howls echoes ..." I think you mean the wolfs howls echoes. It sounds a little awkward though.
"malevolence shadows..." Malevolent.
There are some more errors like these, I would suggest reading it aloud to yourself in order to catch them.
Good concept but your wording makes it a little strange. I think this would do better as a short story rather than a poem. Great imagery though and a great concept. Overall good job :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hi thanks Imara I really appreciate your honest review :) I will do you suggestions :) thanks.

[Mark]

Sounds like the beginnings of a novel ... ? I was captivated, will you be writing more of this place?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Sure Mr. Mark I will :)

[Ency Bearis]

An eerie story poem you had presented kabayan. Good work.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sir Ency :)

[Inda]

This is very good! Dark...reminds me of League of Extraordinary Gentleman. Good Job!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. :)

[Jack...]

I am thinking werewolf in this. Very dramatic and chilling a tale you have woven sir.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. Jack appreciate your precious time :)

[icelandicblue]

Hi Marc-
You've created a very exciting poem. You may want to put the article "a" in front of lurid full moon. You have a very distinct style.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hi Ice thanks for that :) I really appreciate your support, thank you for the reads.

[John F Carver]

Great poem but I confess I was puzzled by the line "Chaos if what he intent..." I just couldn't figure out what it was intended to convey, but the rest was understandable and quite enjoyable for a parody I suppose but a cute little story anyway.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sir, it is chaos what he intent, i just reverse the chaos is his intention :) thanks a lot.

[s y e]

I loved that picture, it's lovely and mysterious in a way! :)

This was another excellent write from you, Marc. I enjoyed it. Really vivid imagery in this piece, felt like I was there. Took us some wild ride! Ha, thanks!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks N.H :) thanks for the reads.