A Black Heart (Tanka)

A Black Heart (Tanka)

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor

 

 

Cerulean sky

Reflects in my naked eye

The day you left me

You quell my own destiny

A selfish one with black heart

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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So short, but it was so intense.
I read it about ten times. Haha.
Nice one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks george :) I appreciate your time reading my work.
I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you I love you all.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Really nice, specialy the last two lines :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

It is a Japanese old writing :) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tanka here is the link you can check th.. read more
Dakshta

11 Years Ago

oh ok..yay I learned a new word today! And that Japanese one! :)
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

lol yeah :)
I'm experiencing greatness at a higher level...Awesome...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Bro :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Well done! I have a weird affection for the word "cerulean", you you pretty much had e at hello with this one. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks :) Ms. Rita I love it also :) that's why i used it always. lol :)
A word painting of an instant. This would make a great animation. Excellent work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Ken :) glad you drop by and I value your review. Thanks a lot.
Sorry, I missed a word out before. Er......use of English, you can QUELL someone's fear but not their destiny, in my humble opinion. Check with the experts - I'm only a priggish a*s.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

I just maintain it, I will be aware next time around. Thanks for the support.
Pollai

11 Years Ago

Personally, I think the use of "quell" can be valid based upon the interpretation. If used in the co.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

My reason here because some marriage end up but still the couple won't let anyone of them happy outs.. read more
Ohh, this one hits me hard; great job and so little words!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Brother :)
the alluevial plains

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review Mike :)
And that's how Karma sometimes works, if so connected... great lines my friend, an unique way to make something clear in this. Reflection ;) this was good!

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Elisa :) appreciate your review.

11 Years Ago

Very welcome dear!
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on April 11, 2013
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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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