I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you I love you all.
It is a Japanese old writing :) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tanka here is the link you can check th.. read moreIt is a Japanese old writing :) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tanka here is the link you can check the beauty of this poetry.
11 Years Ago
oh ok..yay I learned a new word today! And that Japanese one! :)
Sorry, I missed a word out before. Er......use of English, you can QUELL someone's fear but not their destiny, in my humble opinion. Check with the experts - I'm only a priggish a*s.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Mr. Wiseman :)
11 Years Ago
yes but you've left 'quell' there. Look up what it means. P.A.
I just maintain it, I will be aware next time around. Thanks for the support.
11 Years Ago
Personally, I think the use of "quell" can be valid based upon the interpretation. If used in the co.. read morePersonally, I think the use of "quell" can be valid based upon the interpretation. If used in the context of something which overcomes another thing; I perceive it as saying, that when she left him she overcame/crushed his destiny by becoming his destiny. Again, I think the beauty is in your own interpretation. Cheers!
11 Years Ago
My reason here because some marriage end up but still the couple won't let anyone of them happy outs.. read moreMy reason here because some marriage end up but still the couple won't let anyone of them happy outside their vow and even did not settle signing the divorce paper so I have this idea that he/she quelling the destiny of the person to fall in love again and be happy after the devastating marriage life.
And that's how Karma sometimes works, if so connected... great lines my friend, an unique way to make something clear in this. Reflection ;) this was good!
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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..