A Black Heart (Tanka)

A Black Heart (Tanka)

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor

 

 

Cerulean sky

Reflects in my naked eye

The day you left me

You quell my own destiny

A selfish one with black heart

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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Great right love the words that flow so sweet to capture the meaning

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great work. I really liked this one, especially that last line. Very powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is an awesome Tanka. It really drives home the damage done. Superb!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Briana :)
Destiny is a lovely idea, one I would love to believe in, and often we like to ascribe events to it retrospectively ...yes, THIS happened, but it was meant to be, wasn`t it? I enjoyed this muse. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sir Pete :) you will always an inspiration to me.
very nicely written, enjoyed

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Kim, appreciate your precious time reading my work. :)
My review may be shorter than the others but it does not mean I don't like it. It simply means that I don't know any words to describe it.
My review: Great poem, short but powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Angel :) I really appreciate your words it means a lot.
Carnation

11 Years Ago

No problem. Your work wins me over every time.
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:) Thanks again friend.
I saw this in the related writing section of your Medusa poem and thought "Wow, I have a poem with almost the exact same title. I must see what this is about."

So I have. It's a nice poem, I assume you were inspired by this song...I can see why. Are they saying "I'm falling for a monster?"

The second to last line is very moving...on the less happy side of the emotional spectrum.

tar pit/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

I just found it after I am looking for a track to support the poem, I think it is ok same title lol .. read more
Writer #00

11 Years Ago

So I see.
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:) Thanks I will visit your work later :)
Now this poem said a lot with a short few words. What i like the most about your writing is that they are short, but can tell a whole story. Good job

~Your friend Res

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thank you, you are a sweet friend :) glad we become friends today.
Terohime

11 Years Ago

Yes same here. ^^
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:)
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Pax
short and to the point ~ i find this piece a very honest write of what a broken hearted person felt... but your destiny never quell, for destiny is a choice, you have the will to follow another path, another choice and learning that one broken heart can't be fixed then it's was not really meant to be, not really destined for each other... there is always other choices...

a very expressive short piece
Great work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

uli? hahaha
Pax

11 Years Ago

hahaha...
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:) cheers!
Short, but direct and honest. Sometimes less is more, and you've certainly accomplished the essence of that phrase here! Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks again Keith. I also like short poem like this, sometimes long poem will dragged us and end up.. read more

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Added on April 11, 2013
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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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