Destiny is a lovely idea, one I would love to believe in, and often we like to ascribe events to it retrospectively ...yes, THIS happened, but it was meant to be, wasn`t it? I enjoyed this muse. P.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Sir Pete :) you will always an inspiration to me.
My review may be shorter than the others but it does not mean I don't like it. It simply means that I don't know any words to describe it.
My review: Great poem, short but powerful.
I saw this in the related writing section of your Medusa poem and thought "Wow, I have a poem with almost the exact same title. I must see what this is about."
So I have. It's a nice poem, I assume you were inspired by this song...I can see why. Are they saying "I'm falling for a monster?"
The second to last line is very moving...on the less happy side of the emotional spectrum.
tar pit/100
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Really you have the poem title I will check for it, Actually this is a personal experience having in.. read moreReally you have the poem title I will check for it, Actually this is a personal experience having in love with a black heart :) and thanks I already move on :)
11 Years Ago
That's good...that you moved on. Not that it happened. Did you find this song and just decide to po.. read moreThat's good...that you moved on. Not that it happened. Did you find this song and just decide to post it because it fit?
I just found it after I am looking for a track to support the poem, I think it is ok same title lol .. read moreI just found it after I am looking for a track to support the poem, I think it is ok same title lol :)
Now this poem said a lot with a short few words. What i like the most about your writing is that they are short, but can tell a whole story. Good job
~Your friend Res
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Heheh lol I owe you a lot :) thank you. thank you friend :) really great reading your review. Thanks.. read moreHeheh lol I owe you a lot :) thank you. thank you friend :) really great reading your review. Thanks :)
11 Years Ago
No problem, My goal in life it to help everyone to reach for there dreams.
short and to the point ~ i find this piece a very honest write of what a broken hearted person felt... but your destiny never quell, for destiny is a choice, you have the will to follow another path, another choice and learning that one broken heart can't be fixed then it's was not really meant to be, not really destined for each other... there is always other choices...
a very expressive short piece
Great work!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks Pax :)
11 Years Ago
alam mo parang parihos kaming ng ini isip ni mr. wiseman dyan sa baba.... :D
about the quell~ .. read morealam mo parang parihos kaming ng ini isip ni mr. wiseman dyan sa baba.... :D
about the quell~ its a new word for me... na google ko pa yan..lol... but anyways your very much welcome kabayan, always :)
Short, but direct and honest. Sometimes less is more, and you've certainly accomplished the essence of that phrase here! Great job!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks again Keith. I also like short poem like this, sometimes long poem will dragged us and end up.. read moreThanks again Keith. I also like short poem like this, sometimes long poem will dragged us and end up lost. I am considering poem that shorts but it speaks volume and has focus and concentrations.
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