Writer's Pen

 

Short, long, thin, round, metallic and plastic

Wild, smart, erotic, poor, rich, blurred and mannered

Which one did you own?

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A good pen is the key to writing. Sometime good to know many things. To be wild, use wisdom and danced in love give life to the pen. Few great writer's were wealthy men. Many were blurred by alcohol. I have held many kind of pens. A experience Writer's pen can tell real and entertaining tales of life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks for the wonderful insights Coyote your words always a wisdom that the new one like me considers as a treasure thanks a lot.

[InsanityWriter]

Nice. (: I like the imagery... Mine's a bit of everything. ;)

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

A very good delineation of the writer's pen, it challenges insight and reflection. Perhaps you could have formed short statements to make this flow into a free verse.
The last line has a great impact too.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Ate Cyn, I just try to write short poem with great ideas and my mind comes into this.

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Yes some poems like the 10 word poem come to mind with this style.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Yeah, in your assistment did I improved? for one month I am writing, honestly is it my work worth to read?

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

Yes - you write well for one who is just starting. Your work is worth reading because you are able to paint with words - that's one aspect of poetry. Imagery. The other point is you can express emotions with poetic intensity and make the reader "feel the poem". I had a mentor when I was starting to write seriously (LOL!) his name is David Lewis Paget. He taught me about the importance of Rhyme and Substance, and the impact of the last lines.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah I knew him, He is one of my Favorite Author here, I call him king of twist, because I always expect twisted end in his work. :) Good to know that.

[Peter H]

poor lol , but you're kinda right a good pen does inspire one to write great poetry once and awhile

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol thanks Brother :)

[Carnation]

Very smart.
My pen is: short and metallic (it cost a lot of money to!) :P

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol is that a mont blanc? very expensive. lol I owe a lot friend, I will visit your work later :) thanks agaian.

[Carnation]

Spot on, a Mont Blanc it is. That was a good guess, are you psychic?
There is no need for you to read my work. I have plenty reviews on most if them as it is. You need not worry yourself.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol :) that's the pen in my mind lol.

[Pete Langley]

Short and smart. Naaaaa not me! the poem! P.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol you are smart too Mr. Pete :) thanks for your precious time.

[Pax]

hmm.... not much of a pen user in writing my poems... I usually write in pencil, easy to erase if i have some errors... in other ways of understanding this, you have sum up what will our write should be... categorize in each genre... great work!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Pax, I am sure our pen not categorized to erotic one hahahah :)

[Pax]

LOL.... i tried it but its in poetic form, not explicit...lol... your most welcome!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you I love you all.

[Sami Khalil]

With few words you summed it u greatly and covered all genres... Brilliant...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thank you, your precious time is appreciated in reviewing my works Bro. :) thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

The feelings are mutual...You are welcome...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

I have them all, my friend... depends on the day which I use! Wonderful, thoughtful poem.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol thanks Ms. Rita :) it is brilliant to have all and I never have doubt if you said that. :)

[Trigorin]

Not bad. You have a simple concept and while the whole sort of 'listing' idea has been done before, you've executed it nicely. Good work.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Tri, thanks for your precious time in reviewing my work. I really appreciate it.