DOGMA

 

I destroyed the kingdom walls

Blazed the bastion sacred

Crushed the ego of the holy

Now the soldiers draw their swords

I fight for my own freedom

Till my sword loses its sharpness

Till the last drop of my blood

A war, battle for my kind.

I bravely served my only God.

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

People get blinded by so many things even in religion for they can't or don't understand its true message so based on ignorance they fight and kill in the name of God and cause injustice. I'm not saying they don't have the right to believe and defend their beliefs but let us not take God's name in vain and use religion as a weapon to serve the few...
A very good write...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks brother for your wonderful insight, that really true if we look around what happening now in the world.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree...You are welcome...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) thanks again

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[gombeggar]

that is definately a dogma mind

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Gom :)

[Gerald Parker]

You are throwing off poems like snake skins, Sir Marc. Most of us take hours, days, months to complete just a single poem! You are getting the message across - God has a lot to answer for.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) you are one of my inspiration Sir Gerald :)

[Jack...]

The battle rages on...good one Marc. There seems to be no stopping you these days.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) It seems i am addicted now in poetry :) thanks Mr. Jack for the review.

[AYVID N]

"Till my sword loses its sharpness" - Awesome!

"I bravely served my only God" - Just great!

Excellent write on human principles Marc!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes thanks a lot :) I am always think why people confused and cruel when it comes to religion that leads me writing this piece. Thanks for your precious time Div, I appreciate it much.

[AYVID N]

This was an awesome write Marc. You are very welcome!

[Eddie Phillips]

God Will's It! So many people have died because they assume they know what God wills. That is what this poem made me think about. Great Poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. that is really true, some people died because they thought they are doing or they sacrifice their life to GOD. Thanks for your great insight.

[Dakshta]

We fight a new battle each day...some fight for their religion, for their belief...while some fight to prove their existence, some fight to see a new ray of hope, we fight and fight....and till our last breath we will have to keep fighting this battle called life...

I must say really nice writing Mark :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

That's really true, that's what happened today, crushing each other in the name of GOD. I just can't get why some people ready to die to protect the religion.

[Dakshta]

YuP but I guess we are lucky that we are in this century, people of this time knows that all this is wrong...back in the old times the conditions were worst...you can take the time when India and Pakistan were divided....everything went crazy, even the kids got out on the roads with swords in there little hands... I think the conditions right now are much better..

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) yeah I believe it happened like that. even now they still don't trust each other.

[Dakshta]

Ya they don't although really can't understand why such hate..I mean we all are humans then what's the point in fighting over about the skin color or the religion..

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yeah this world really have some force making us dumb. lol

[Dakshta]

Haha true that :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :)

[Ency Bearis]

Much said with this poem with strong message.Good write Marc.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Sir Ency :) I appreciate your review.

[Peter H]

hmmmmmmmmm good poem , its a nice engaging one

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Brother :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

We are fighting for our own belief- our religion. Sometimes we forgot we are serving only one God, though in our own different ways. Religion cannot save us. It's our own faith. Joining a group of 'holy ones' cannot make us holy, too. We will save our own soul by being truly good in our minds, in our words, and in our deeds.
Nice job here, Marc!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Seems you wake up early lol :) and have a very powerful message that paints a positive thought in this piece. Thanks a lot for your time my friend Dhaye :) I always consider your words an inspiration to keep me writing.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

:)

[Mariam]

It reminds me of gladiators...Great work.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mariam every time I made this kind of Genre I thankful always for your thought. :) your inputs before is helpful.

[Mariam]

haha this blushes me.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) yeah thanks a lot.