DOGMA

 

I destroyed the kingdom walls

Blazed the bastion sacred

Crushed the ego of the holy

Now the soldiers draw their swords

I fight for my own freedom

Till my sword loses its sharpness

Till the last drop of my blood

A war, battle for my kind.

I bravely served my only God.

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

People get blinded by so many things even in religion for they can't or don't understand its true message so based on ignorance they fight and kill in the name of God and cause injustice. I'm not saying they don't have the right to believe and defend their beliefs but let us not take God's name in vain and use religion as a weapon to serve the few...
A very good write...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks brother for your wonderful insight, that really true if we look around what happening now in the world.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree...You are welcome...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) thanks again

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[InsanityWriter]

Quite a powerful piece. :) Well done.

[Nick.B]

A great imaginary on this one, very inspiring words

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Brother :) I treasure your precious time reading my work.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you I love you all.

[Sethnicity]

This is inspiring. This is something the youth can definitely relate to, I'd like to colab on this... Just sayin!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Sure I am willing too :) tell how we do it.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks for the review :)

[francis]

i think people should think of what they do.dogma or no dogma

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Brother :)

[Inda]

Great write, very thought provoking.

[Pollai]

Great imagery. A good read.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Amigo :)

[Mike Emil]

dogma is the drink of fools
try brandy

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) lol love it!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Purity in dignity! I can't say more... you had me in this intriguing battle...
Just excellent short poetry.

- Elisa

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Elisa I am speechless for outpouring support :)

The pleasure is mine ;)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) thanks again