Shinobi Poison

     © 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor

Open your noxious lips

        Swallow my soul without fear

  The summer won’t dry

 

 

Reviews

[Junert]

This is so romantic and intense.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks my Sis Junert :) glad you like it!

[Jack...]

Very nicely done Marc. This is very special. This one runs deep in 3 short lines.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks a lot Mr. Jack :) nice hearing words from the expert :)

[Holly Mason]

like the concept of swallowing ones soul-interesting truly
short and decisive like it much
thank you for sharing

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Holly I really appreciate your insight on this piece, thanks a lot.

[Frieda P]

That was a Holy Cats moment! Woo, 'swallow my soul'...short & sultry Marc! ;-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Frie :) lol you amazed me with Holy Cats hehe.

[Frieda P]

Ha, that means I'm flabbergasted, blown away....you earned it!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

heheh lol :) thanks a lot!

[Frieda P]

;-D

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. You are taking us deeper and deeper...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) thanks Bro. I am thinking under 13 can still read this.

[Sami Khalil]

Good to know...Hahaha...

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) thanks

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)