Puck's Last Breath

Puck's Last Breath

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor
"

Fairies cry whey they heard Puck dies.

"

Pick puck in prairie  

Spring brings nothing but dreary

Fairies cry, puck dies.

 

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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This is pleasant word spinning poetry, Marc. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Mr. Pete :)
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Pax
oh... a haiku... the police is hidding around... but you're all good! lol :D
Beautiful work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Lol thanks Pax, yeah the Haiku police is always in the corner, it is good Dhaye is here to guide me... read more
Artwork and poetry was amazing. Made the situation come to life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote :) glad you drop by :)
Nice use of alliteration.
Another good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

lol thanks Dhaye, you know I am struggling because some of my friends doesn't believe in this craft .. read more
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

"... a second thought to pursue this passion." - Nobody should hinder us in our passion. Keep going.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Dhaye :)
oh so nice!
But do not be sad...Spring brings beauty too :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks again :)
Mariam

11 Years Ago

My pleasure
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:)

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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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