Where is this picture from? I really like it. It's really creepy, sort of. The alliteration in your first line really helps the poem flow, and I like that, and I also liked your unique rhyming pattern, it really adds a clever touch of uniqueness to your poem. I sort of giggled at your description- and sorry, again, I can find nothing here to help patch up. It's probably because I'm getting around to these reviews so late. I've been busy, sorry I couldn't get around sooner. And, as usual, nice job.
I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you, I love you all.
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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..