Again with the imagery! As I said, I'm not familiar with haikus so I can't justifiably critique them, but I really have to commend you for being so consistently awesome. You always put the reader into these worlds you create with so few words, in even as few that make up a haiku. Really great.
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11 Years Ago
Thanks :) Brother you are always my inspiration. :)
As I said to my class yesterday, Do not be afraid of Haiku! It is a form wonderful in its simplicity.. read moreAs I said to my class yesterday, Do not be afraid of Haiku! It is a form wonderful in its simplicity, speaking volumes as you have done here.
11 Years Ago
Thanks again, you really an inspiration for a new writer like me. :) Thanks a lot.
oh, I heard about it in the news... a sad event!
another powerful haiku my friend...
I like this kabayan...
it speaks much!
i think your loving haiku now ;)
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11 Years Ago
Lol yeah I love it Pax :) thanks for reading :) Domo Arigato!
11 Years Ago
oh.... you know also japanese... that's great, your most welcome :)
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heheh yes my sister and her family living in Tokyo :) that's why i learned some words. Thanks again.
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that's nice...to hear... i really wanted to visit tokyo someday... have you gone there kabayan?
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Not yet its cold can't stand in cold weather.
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really.... may winter time ata dyan sa DUbia diba?
11 Years Ago
Sobra ang lamig sa Japan ang lamig sa middle east di pa masyado.
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oh yes i see the difference... kasi ganun rin yung sa ate ko... doon sa Holland... nag negative nga .. read moreoh yes i see the difference... kasi ganun rin yung sa ate ko... doon sa Holland... nag negative nga yung degs...eh...
11 Years Ago
Oo nga europe yun eh doon grabe din ang lamig :)
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pero kaya mo yan.... i had experienced very cold weather.... kaya rin naman pala.... may heater nama.. read morepero kaya mo yan.... i had experienced very cold weather.... kaya rin naman pala.... may heater naman yan sila... so i think magiging ok ka lang doon...
11 Years Ago
Lol palaging nag lilindol doon hehehe
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why are you worrying... lol... visit lang naman... as if doon ka mag tatagal... dream ko kasing maka.. read morewhy are you worrying... lol... visit lang naman... as if doon ka mag tatagal... dream ko kasing makapunta ng japan and see the wonderful sakura tree...
lol oo maganda yung tree na yun at pati ang apple walang maka pag much sa fuji green apple masarap, .. read morelol oo maganda yung tree na yun at pati ang apple walang maka pag much sa fuji green apple masarap, juicy at saka crisp when you bite.
11 Years Ago
hahaha.... ngayon napunta na tayo sa pag kain...lol...
gojira lives
only toho can kill gojira
the americans tried with that mathew brodrick fil.. read moregojira lives
only toho can kill gojira
the americans tried with that mathew brodrick film but gojira survived!!! HAI!
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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..