Earthquake

Earthquake

A Poem by Marc Marlon Villaflor

Mountain Fuji roars

Cracks Tokyo house's wooden floor

Hiroshi wide awake

 

© 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor


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Again with the imagery! As I said, I'm not familiar with haikus so I can't justifiably critique them, but I really have to commend you for being so consistently awesome. You always put the reader into these worlds you create with so few words, in even as few that make up a haiku. Really great.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks :) Brother you are always my inspiration. :)



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a well descriptive Haiku greatly done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks again Ency :) glad you like it.
It's Good, I do wish the last line was more encompassing of all of the people... Yet, never-mind the will of the critic and stick with it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Seth love your words it inspire me :)
Indeed, this is nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Mr. Jack thanks a lot :) for kind words.
short and decisive-love it
wide awake yes
a natural disaster written in a few words
good job and thank you for sharing much!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Holly you are always an inspiration thanks a lot. :)
Short but says alot, nice write, Marc!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks N.H glad you like :)
s y e

11 Years Ago

welcome, anytime :)
Quick yet tells the tale well. Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Angel :) I appreciate your review all the time.
very well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks Gom. always appreciate your review :)
This short verse really says it all. Wonderfully written, Marc!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

As I said to my class yesterday, Do not be afraid of Haiku! It is a form wonderful in its simplicity.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Thanks again, you really an inspiration for a new writer like me. :) Thanks a lot.
Rita L. Sev

11 Years Ago

You're very welcome! :)
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Pax
oh, I heard about it in the news... a sad event!
another powerful haiku my friend...
I like this kabayan...
it speaks much!
i think your loving haiku now ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

lol oo maganda yung tree na yun at pati ang apple walang maka pag much sa fuji green apple masarap, .. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

hahaha.... ngayon napunta na tayo sa pag kain...lol...
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

hhhaha oo nga :)
where is gojira??? HAI!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Yes Doremon kills Godzilla
Mike Emil

11 Years Ago

gojira lives
only toho can kill gojira
the americans tried with that mathew brodrick fil.. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

:) I will watch that :)

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Added on April 9, 2013
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Marc Marlon Villaflor
Marc Marlon Villaflor

DIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates



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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..

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