Earthquake

Mountain Fuji roars

Cracks Tokyo house's wooden floor

Hiroshi wide awake

 

Reviews

[dave]

Again with the imagery! As I said, I'm not familiar with haikus so I can't justifiably critique them, but I really have to commend you for being so consistently awesome. You always put the reader into these worlds you create with so few words, in even as few that make up a haiku. Really great.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks :) Brother you are always my inspiration. :)

[InsanityWriter]

What manga is the picture from? It looks interesting. ;) I really liked the poem!! :D

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks my friend :) I just pick it up from Google :)

[Eddie Phillips]

I enjoyed it. I think the title elucidates your meaning. Keep writing.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thansk Bro. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I am just writing for a month and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank you, I love you all.

[Dakshta]

Nature..nice work Marc! :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks :) heheh

[Dakshta]

welcome :)

[AYVID N]

Conveys the magnificent fury of nature!
Excellent

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Div, :) you spent your precious time to my work, I am deeply touch with this my friend. Thanks a lot! I will visit your work later.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Marc. Your work is always a pleasure to read!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks again.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nice Marc but the last line has six on!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol :) got to perfect it next time Mr. John :) thanks for the reads.