ECHOES STING

I dreamed, you dreamed, they dreamed.
I smiled, you smiled, and they smiled.
I cried, you cried, they cried.
Same pattern, same emotion, different direction.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

I've read this and re read this and now reading it again....

I like....


apologies for no reviewing the first time... :O)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Yellow B. I appreciate you for dropping by :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome :O)

[Frieda P]

The repetition works well in this one...so few words with a big message. Nice one Marc.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Frie, you are always an inspiration.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure always Marc. :-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Friend.

[Rita L. Sev]

I like the simplicity of your message. There are so many ways people can deal with Life, even when faced with the same events. Nicely done!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks you are right 100% thanks for dropping :)

[Inda]

We are trapped in so many ways. Great job here!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. I agree :) thanks for the review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but when all directions converge...there is a togetherness...wish we could all get in sync. there may be less tears.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Absolutely Mr. Jacob thanks for the reads.

[Rogue]

Simple and yet very well done.
Not sure my perception is what was intended, but I take away "we are all the same and yet different" from these words.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes you got it Rogue my point here everybody equally created but live in different direction. Some writers may like our works some may not, the truth is we are heading in different direction and that is the sad facts. Some may be beaten, some may win still heading in different direction. life is a complex landscaped we are living.

[Rogue]

Yes, although we head in different directions it is always possible to meet up again at certain points on common ground.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yes :) and that is possible.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A wonderful, simple little piece that is thought provoking and balanced. Nice work Marc!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mr. John I am eager to write more when you are here always lol :) thanks for the support.

[Mike Emil]

i drank, i drank, i drank
saki works wonders

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Mike :) your words is wonders also.

[Trigorin]

Not bad. A little simple for my tastes, and I think the sort of 'threes' theme in this is somewhat overdone, but I think the brevity helps it, and you do have a good concept overall.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Tri, your words always appreciated thanks for the reads.

[Sami Khalil]

Short but full of powerful meanings...Pen on dear poet...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Thanks Bro. :) glad you like it :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) Thanks.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)